Assignment # Four: 

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            My rough draft was a terrible mess; it was literally a shitty first draft. It had many grammatical errors like sentences fragments, tense shifts and misplaced modifiers. My rough draft's major error was the content's organization. It was a total mess because my ideas were scattered all over my paper. I realized that my rough draft, I put all my ideas together without organizing it. I was told by the tutor in the tutoring center that my paper seemed to be cohesive. My rough draft needed more description and relevance. I revised the paper myself a couple times and noticed some of these errors, but then I had classmates peer edit it they noticed the same things. The writing center also helped me peer edit my essay and improve my content's organization.

           Receiving all the help I was able to get I think that my final draft seems better than my rough draft. My final draft seems to be more organized and more descriptive. I believe that the strongest aspect of my essay would be the conclusion because I think that I wrapped up my story well. The weakest would be my introduction because I feel like something is missing to make it sound more interesting.