For my writing portfolio, I want to revise my analyzing an argument essay. The strengths of my analyzing an argument essay were that I had some good points and fairly stated thesis. Although I had some good points, they were not very clear; I needed to clarify many of my ideas because they seem as if they are irrelevant and redundant.
To perfect my essay, I am going to explain/clarify many of my ideas so they are better understood, or more detailed, by a skeptical reader. I need to go back, and revise my essay more than just three times so I can improve all of the content and clarify. Also, I need to make sure that my supporting details match up with my thesis.
I also need to organize my essay because I seem to go back and forth with some of my supporting details. I need to add more transitions and make my essay be easy for a person to read, so that my content flows thoroughly.
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